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Someone Else's Dream by ~KenJKitsune:iconKenJKitsune:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Song


Someone Else’s Dream

Snowflakes dance across my eyes
Visions of you cloud my mind.
Days gone by, frozen in time
Never to melt from my heart.

Sleepless nights go by
Thinking of you
Countless days go by
Thinking of you
My mind knows you’re gone
But my heart won’t admit
You’re in someone else’s dream
Tonight

Raindrops fall from my eyes
Rainclouds of what was fill my skies.
Nights gone by, washed away
Flowing in the current of time.

Sleepless nights go by
Thinking of you
Countless days go by
Thinking of you
My mind knows you’re gone
But my heart won’t admit
You’re in someone else’s dream
Tonight

There’s nothing there anymore
There’s nothing there

Sleepless nights go by
Thinking of you
Countless days go by
Thinking of you
My mind knows you’re gone
But my heart won’t admit
You’re in someone else’s dream
Tonight
©2006-2009 ~KenJKitsune
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Submitted: June 21, 2006
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Sung in the key of C#... Major chord (just in case yer wondering...)

Well, here it is. This is the first song I ever wrote, dating back to December of 2003. Looking at this and then at my more recent songs/stories, I think I've come a long way in my style and technique.




For her... (only three people here know what that means)
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~alienboypoet:iconalienboypoet: Sep 9, 2006, 5:51:48 PM
I like. I like alot. You got tallent dude. :tux:
~KenJKitsune:iconKenJKitsune: Sep 9, 2006, 7:03:51 PM
Heh...thanks a lot! :)

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~JoelleOEtienne:iconJoelleOEtienne: Sep 11, 2006, 8:50:33 PM
*is in awe* *Hugs* This is great. Hey, at least you got some inspiration out of that whole ordeal, right?
~KenJKitsune:iconKenJKitsune: Sep 12, 2006, 7:30:52 AM
Yep. Tis true. But the ordeal occured two years after this was written, so there's a little but of a continuity issue. Ah well ^_^

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The Black and Orange Fox
~Geolyn:iconGeolyn: Sep 14, 2006, 5:41:54 PM
Very nice. I like how you break the rythem with the word tonight--that really gives it a saddening, regretful feel.

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~KenJKitsune:iconKenJKitsune: Sep 15, 2006, 9:59:33 AM
Thank you very much ^_^

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